Assalamu'alaikum Warahmatullahi Wabarakatuh
Hi guys, here I go again with my writing, still
about covid-19. You know how important to prevent covid-19 in this era. One way to prevent it is
self-quarantine. Want to know what is it? and how to do it? just take a look of
my writing. Keep staying in your home. Stay save dan healthy. By the way, happy
reading y'all!
SELF-QUARANTINE
To begin with, self-quarantine means staying in your home and
not leaving for 14 days. Moreover, it also means do not allow visitors
into your home or avoid mass gathering. In fact, the Centers for Disease
Control and Prevention (CDC) explain that the practice of a quarantine specifically
involves the separation of a person or group of people. Reasonably,
people who believed to have been exposed to a communicable disease but
not yet symptomatic, to prevent the possible spread of the communicable
disease. In order to reduce the spread of covid-19, it is very important
to do self-quarantine. These are some simple ways to do self-quarantine in
order to prevent covid-19.
In the first place, don't leave your house unless absolutely necessary. Certainly,
people who are able to go outside are medical officer.You have to stay online
on your phone or laptop for work or school.You need to restrict your activities
outside of your home, including going to school, work, public areas or using
public transportation. In brief, you need to avoid mass gathering. If
possible, stay in a separate room and use a separate bathroom to protect your
family. While there are no reports of transmission of the new
coronavirus to pets, it's recommended that you limit contact with animals until
more is known about the virus. This is not only just for protecting your own
self but also the other selves. Pay attention to your health and others by
staying at your home.
In the second place, wash your hands often. For instance, wash your hands
after blowing your nose, sneezing or coughing. Frequently, clean your
hands with an alcohol-based hand rub or wash them with soap and water. It is
important to wash your hands with soup. A chemistry professor, Palli
Thordarson mentions why soap is so effective. He said, the soap dissolves the
fat membrane and the virus falls apart like a house of cards and 'dies', or
rather, we should say it becomes inactive as viruses aren’t really alive. Hands
touch many surfaces and can pick up viruses. Once contaminated, hands can
transfer the virus to your eyes, nose or mouth. In other words, avoid
touching your face.
Last but not least, monitor your symptoms. Take your temperature to check for a
fever. In addition, take note if you're beginning to cough or
experiencing shortness of breath. You may or may not experience covid-19
symptoms (coughing, fever and shortness of breath) during your quarantine. Next,
if you do begin experiencing symptoms you need to do these things such as
wear a mask when you're around people or use common spaces in your home, cover
your coughs and sneezes, wash your hands afterward, contact your health care
provider or use telemedicine to seek guidance from home.
You know how important self-quarantine is. There are some ways to
do self-quarantine in order to prevent covid-19. For instance, don't leave
your house unless absolutely necessary, wash your hands often, monitor
your symptoms. Overall, in order to reduce the spread of
covid-19, it is very crucial to do self-quarantine.
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ReplyDeleteHey, Nadia.. this is actually my first visit to ur blog, and what an interesting essay to welcome me.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, as great as it is, I believe you'd like to know some errors I found from ur writing.
First, please pay attention more to the objects of the prepositions cuz I found a few errors about them :
"for the 14 days" : you shouldn't use article 'the' here, just "14 days" is fine, unless you want to make it specific like "for the next 14 days". Then that's the fitting one.
"into the home" : Again, the use of "the" doesn't fit here.. it should be "into your home" or "into the house"
Also, I actually kinda confused with this sentence :
"As the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) explain that the practice of a quarantine specifically involves the separation of a person or group of people reasonably believed to have been exposed to a communicable disease but not yet symptomatic, from others who have not been so exposed, to prevent the possible spread of the communicable disease"
I know which the dependent sentence is, but I can't find the independent one.. so you should make sure more about it, especially when you plan to make a long sentence like this.
Anyway, that's all from me.
Keep practicing, and I'm sure you'll get better in no time.
Hi, Ovia. Thank you so much for the correction. I'll fix it later:)
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